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What You Believe About Showing & Telling Is A Lie

Writerly Maxims: Part one of a series that will improve your writing.

James Calderon
3 min readApr 27, 2021

Show Don’t Tell

This is the most common maxims shared to new writers.

Yet, if you were to pick up any book on your shelf and read through a few pages, I’m confident that you’d find at least one, if not more than one instance of a solid tell.

In general “show don’t tell” is not bad advice, and understanding the execution of a good “show” rather than a “tell” is perhaps the most powerful discipline any writer will ever master for crafting a compelling story.

In practice however, those who have delved too greedily and too deep into the realm of “show” often find that they have packed and wordy chapters upwards of 3,000 and more. They have readers who continuously miss important details in critical sequences. These writers become trapped in the exercise of showing rather than creating impactful and concise understandings that are needed to get a reader invested in the story.

The Differences of a Show and a Tell

A good show pulls the reader in and evokes feelings and connections that are not soon to be forgotten.

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James Calderon
James Calderon

Written by James Calderon

Fantasy Writer, Marketing Professional, Ex-Game Industry & Self-Help, here to lift up fellow writers and share insights about the craft of writing.

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